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Revenge of Jeena

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Revenge of Jeena



     


     It was a bright day on Nanairo, as Jeena worked on the ship. Two months had gone by, since she’d been abducted by the Krawl, and interrogated by Maja. Now a day had gone by that she didn’t remember what happened, not a night went by that she didn’t dream of still being restrained and tickled for hours by that vermin.



     It ate at her mind, how close she was at giving certain codes over to the enemy. A few minutes more, and Maja would have had her prize, and would have kept a new “toy” to play with. Jeena was just lucky her friends had managed to find her, and come when they did.



     The door of the hanger bay opened, and her partner, Rallen walked in, with a huge goofy grin on his face. Jeena had never told him, nor their friend Aldous, what Maja had done… not completely. It was kind of embarrassing that tickling, a child’s game of ultimate uncle, had nearly done her in. No broken bones, no marks on her skin… that lasted. She had called it some. “girl time”.



    “Guess who just got caught with her hands in the cookie jar,” he said with bright brown eyes ablaze. “A certain High Krawl, who had been talking to you a few months back.”



     A chill went up Jeena’s spine as she blinked. “What?”



    “The NPP  task force caught her without much incident. She was completely taken surprise. Didn’t even get a chance to escape.” He picked up and apple and chomped down on it. “And the best part is, she has certain information on the Krawl… as to where those fiends went to after we kicked their butts.”



    “But she’s not talking,” Jeena said with a hopeful gasp.



    “As much as you did, when she had you over for a little tea party,” Rallen said with a nod. “The commander wants you to talk to her, see if you can get anything.” Suddenly his smile vanished. “But…,”



    “You don’t think it’s a good idea?” Jeena was hurt. She cocked her head.



    “I’m afraid you might go a little too far,” Rallen said. “I still don’t know what she did to you, and I’m afraid your need for revenge might push you over the edge.”



    “Only if I snap and make her laugh to death,” Jeena said with a giggle, her eyes twinkling. “Don’t worry so much… that doesn’t suit you at all!” She seemed to wiggle a lot in anticipation, as if she had to really, really pee. “So when do I get a crack at her?”



    “When you are ready,” Rallen said with a sigh.



    “Good, then all I will need is some feathers, and I can begin!” she giggled.



     Rallen frowned. “Feathers?!”



     Jeena marched quickly toward the exit of the hanger, turning to give her partner a super cute, perky smile, her eyes closed with glee. “Feathers,” she said.



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     Maja had to blink a few times as the darkness gave way to light. She was sitting, handcuffed in a chair. For some reason a few minutes before that, the guards had managed to use some kind of device to melt her shadowy shoes, revealing very pale, purple feet. When she had asked what for, they simply answered that it was what the interrogator had asked for.



     And now that she saw who the interrogator was, she felt a lump in her throat. “Don’t even think you’ll get anything from me, dear.” Jeena stood hovering over her, smiling like a madwoman. “I’m stronger willed, and I’m no…hahahahahot tihihciklish!” she said, her words melting quickly to laughter as Jeena switched on her scanner and blasted the light to her feet, drilling its ways between her toes.



    “You seem plenty ticklish too me,” Jeena giggled, turning off the device. “I’ll give you the same chance you gave me. Talk and it will go easy on you. Don’t talk, and we’re going to have so much fun, its going to be insane!” She winked at the High Krawl. “Please, for the both of us, don’t talk though, okay?” She giggled, and knelt down, running her fingers up and down Maja’s soles. “Wow, such cold piggy toes! You really need to get them into the light more often!”



    “Nohohohoho, I’m not going to sahahahay anythihihiing!” Maja bit her lips and held the laughter in, as Jeena scribbled on her pale skin, holding her toes up with the palm of her free hand to prevent them from crinkling, and slowing the tickle sensation.



     “Oh goody! This will be good for my therapy then!” Jeena giggled, clawing her fingers between the toes, and raking them straight down Maja’s soles. “Some how, I just knew this would be a very sensitive area.” She tickled Maja that way for nearly five minutes straight, really working over the right foot, at the while Maja bit her lips, piercing them with her teeth. “Oh, you are strong willed, but I think we both know who will crack.”



    “You lihihitle, brahahat! Stahahahaop!” Maja shut her eyes, panting quickly to try and swallow her giggling. “You’re not as good as this than, mehehehe, you knohohohow! I hahahahahad you beheheheheheging almohohohost…. Oh Gohahahahahahad not there! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Not wihihihith thohohohose!” Maja thrashed in the chair, her purple face turning pink as she screeched with laughter.



    “I thought this was going to work,” Jeena squealed with laughter, sawing the toes with her feathers. She worked at that for another five minutes, and then turned to the other foot, dancing the feathery blades all over the sole, making Maja whimper with laughter. Then she stopped. “Need to pee?” she asked.



     Once Maja had finished panting, she glared at the pink haired girl. “No.”



    “Gonna tell me that info?” Jeena asked, with a closed eyed smile.



    “Bite me, brat!” Maja howled.



     “Good idea, I haven’t had lunch yet, and ribs sound yummy!” Jeena laughed. She switched on her scanner, and shot it at Maja’s waist, melting her ‘shirt’ so it revealed a purple tummy and some very yummy looking ribs. Before the High Krawl could protest, Jeena leaned down, and began biting her ribs softly.



    “Oh Swehehehehet Lohohohord of the Krahahahahawl!” Maja screeched with laughter, thrashing even more fiercely as the chewing continued. “No, no…. NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!” She shut her eyes, hoping to blind her senses to the sensation, but it only made it all that much worse. And Jeena’s small nose, wiggling on her skin, her pink hair draping across her belly. It was horrible. “Get you’re hair off of mehehehehehehehehe!” Maja swore.



     Jeena looked at her with a frown, and blinked, before smiling evilly. “Oh, what? You don’t like my hair?” She threw her head back, letting the pink threads of her hair dancing in the air. “Well I do, its so soft, and perky!” She giggled girlishly, lifting her hands to her chin. “Wanna feel?”



   “No, no, no, no, no! I did already, I believe you!” Maja said, her eyes turning terrified.



     Jeena giggled and bent down, holding her head to the floor so her hair flipped over her face, and slowly dragged the silky threads back and forth across Maja’s stomach. The High Krawl went ballistic with laughter and curses. She thrashed so hard, Jeena was afraid she might pop a bone out of place. Maja might not have cared about that, but Jeena wasn’t as cruel as the Krawl. She stopped and let her catch her breath.



    “Why… why did you stop?” Maja hissed. “Of course, not that I’m not ungrateful.”



    “I don’t want to hurt you, just want the info,” Jeena said.



    “Then you should not have stopped. I might have broken with a torture like that,” the dark woman said with a smile. “Especially how long you did it for.” Sweat poured down her skin, and her face was now a very light shade of pink instead of purple. Her own hair clinging to her forehead.



    “How long did I tickle you like that?” Jeena blinked and looked at her scanner, which had told her an hour had gone by. “How did you survive that long without air!” Jeena squeaked.



    “I’m not human, silly girl. I’m Krawl. I can breathe a lot longer with shorter amount of air in my lungs than you can.” She blinked and slumped in her chair. “Told you, you couldn’t break me.”



     Jeena listened, and then flung herself at the Krawl. Her finger dug under Maja’s arms, and began wiggling, as a new light struck her eyes. “Well then, now that I know that bit of information,” she giggled. “Back to business.”



     Maja howled with laughter again, and thrashed even more. She was tired. Jenna was a human, and not as strong as a Krawl, to the point that she showed concern for an enemy, but still all the same, if Maja could tickle Jeena like Jeena was tickling Maja, their first session would not have lasted so long, probably only a minute or two. The girl was a good tickler after all. She even took a few minutes break with her fingers to raspberry into Maja’s sides, navel, and underarms. She nibbled, and thrashed her hair on pale skin, until Maja finally felt her throat give out on her, and she broke into silent laughter, and then silence as darkness took her.



**********



    “You never told me that Maja did that to you, Jeena,” Rallen said, walking down the corridor. He looked at the girl, who seemed to glow with a strength she hadn’t had before. “That was horrible!”



    “You were watching?” the girl asked, turning to look at her partner. She blushed and looked at her feet.



    “A lot of the force was, the commander nearly decided to stop you with the hair thing, after seven minutes, but Dr. Kate said she didn’t think Krawl anatomy was the same as human’s and that she thought Maja could take it.” He looked down at his own feet. “Turns out she was right.”



    “I can’t believe I tickled her for so long, four hours, none stop, before she fainted!” Jeena said, tapping the ends of her pointing fingers together.



    “Not sure if the commander will be happy with those tactics, Jeena. He didn’t seem very happy. He said if we had to resort to the same things the Krawl did to us, we might as well just accept the darkness as well.”



     She turned to look at her partner. “Think I might get court-martialed?!”



     Rallen sighed, and smiled, shaking his head. “Doubt it. Kate snapped at the commander, and reminded him of the anatomy thing, then said, him being a typical human male, he probably was getting a kick outta watching it.” He laughed. “The commander didn’t say anything then, just blushed and walked out!”



     Jeena giggled, as she walked with her partner, and then both stopped as an alarm went off. People ran this way and that, before someone stopped before them, and saluted. “Rallen? Jeena?” they nodded. “The commander wants to see you, post haste!”



************



    “She got away,” he sighed. “Not sure how, unless by passing out like that, she managed to trigger some shadow skill that allowed her to escape.” He looked at the tape. One moment, Maja was laying on her cot, in her cell. The next, she was gone. But in her place was an orb. “It reads for Jeena to play it.” He handed the pink haired girl the sphere.



     Jeena studied it for a few seconds, and then switched a little button on. Maja’s image appeared. “Nice try, kiddo, but not really good enough.” She winked. “All though you have skills, you brat. I’d hate to see what you would have planned if you had a few more hours with me, so I managed to fuel the darkness in your tickling frenzy to escape for the time. Just in case you were curious as to how I pulled the … Houdini, I believe the word is.” She threw back her head and laughed, at her own joke, with that annoying, taunting laugh of her. Then she looked back at Jeena. “Perhaps next time,” she said with a wink. “Maybe you can bring the little NPP boy, Rallen, and we’ll see if we make a good… team.” She laughed again. “But with a consolation prize, I’ll let you know where you can find wimp Jado.” Schematics appeared on the orb. “Let him know, that’s for trying to absorb me, Rallen, darling. And now, I really must go, kids. See you soon!”



     Jeena watched the orb blink into darkness, and put it down. She almost had her, not bad. She turned and looked at Rallen, ready for the adventure of kicking Jado’s butt, but he must have thought she was thinking of something else. “Hehe, no, no, I won’t betray you like that, Rallen. I just thought you were ready for another round with Jado!”



     Rallen’s eyes shrunk with relief, and he sighed. “Well, if he can’t beat me with all four High Krawl powers, and his real body, I doubt he’ll beat me in some giant Krawlsphere! Let’s go!” He turned and speed for the hanger, with Jeena right on his heels.



    



     

sequel to just some girltime!
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TigrisISA's avatar
Being captured and tickled wouldn't make anyone spill any info. It also wouldn't scar someone for life.